Re: At last my Page.

[Michael <mk@netstra.com.au>]

Hi Robin,

For a first attempt it's actually quite good. However a few comments if i 
may. [I am critical when it comes to web design, so please dont take 
offence to anything below]

Firstly, and definately most important is that yellow on white is virtually 
unreadable. This can easily be fixed by choosing a more suitably colour to 
go onto white, or to use a background image of some sort. 

Secondly, the images at the top of the page appear a tad 'rough'. It's a 
very common thing with web pages and even I have made that mistake many 
times. There are many ways of overcoming this, but when scanning the images 
and resizing them within your image maniuplation program, ensure that it's 
set to full colour(and not 256 colours). Let me know which program you are 
using to scan and convert your images and i can advise you how to fix this 
accordingly.

Thirdly, and this is not a bad point at all, in the future as the page 
grows, it might be better to move the site all into individual pages, to 
help with loading times and simplicity.

Now the good part :) Overall I have found the page load quite fast, and be 
quite informative. That being a very basic but very important rule of 
design. (we learnt in school, KISS. which means "keep it simple stupid". By 
the way that comment is in no way a reflection on you or your site, its 
what we learnt at school)

Things look promising!

Regards
Michael


Robin said on 16-Oct-1999 in <19VN3.13024$D33.38021@ozemail.com.au>:

>Mabe it's a bit rough for my first attempt
>let me know your thoughts.
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